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I watch from the sidelines
As they beat your face in
Wondering if I should do something
If I should try to stop it
Cuz I know what you've been through
I've seen it happen before

They beat you senseless
Like you're a punching bag
You just take every punch in
And don't look back
At the kids who are yelling
"Fight! Fight! Fight!"

I don't understand why
You let yourself be abused
By the ones that you use to call "Friends"
You just stand there
Refusing to fight
And I don't understand why

You let yourself get killed today
I feel so guilty, I don't know what to say
I know that I should have helped you
Even if it meant me getting killed too
At least you would of known
That you died with a friend
This is about bullying. Cuz it is. It's about what could happen. I like how this came out though, but I guess it could use some work. It takes place in anyplace in general. But i wrote it once I got home form school. There was a fight in my school and a kid was getting beat up for some stupid reason beyond me. What I don't get is when people are there watching and just yelling "FIGHT!" when they could get more then seriousily hurt. I mean, they could beat the kid so bad that he/she could get depressed or even worse, be killed. Which is what I put in this poem. I mean, all of it effects lives more than the people know.
I wrote this yesterday actually, Friday, March 18, 2005.

"Beaten Senseless" poem (c)
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Cat-C Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
I've never seen a fight. I'd like to though ^^; I'm kindof a vilolentish person
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cerberus52 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
I understand what it's like... to just stand on the sidelines... I used to do that a lot, I also used to be the one getting punched O.o but at least it doesn't happen anymore *phew*. For being such a sad poem... I really did like reading it...
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Mochizuki Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
Weirdly, I've never gotten into a fight yet in my life. That involved getting punched I mean. But I have watched from the sidelines atleast a few times. That's good that it doesn't happen anymore.
Thank you.
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